In the conduct of the drama unskilful and inartificial. the advertisement prefixed, the author observes, that he is less unwilling to incur the censure of critics, than to strain historical facts. He is apprehensive that the moral reflections may be thought too numerous; but declares, that he considers it as a more pardonable error to exceed, than to be deficient in a decent regard to morality and religion. This regard for morality and religion has induced him to subjoin an after-scene to the catastrophe, for the express purpose of suggesting moral reflections; an amiable purpose, for the sake of which many authors have injured their compositions, without improving their readers. The proper moral of a drama is to excite vivid virtuous emotions in the heart, not to exhibit a demonstration of some abstract principle of morality. In the Dramatic Essay, the characters are neither sufficiently various nor sufficiently marked. Livingston and Chrichton are similar in character and similar in conduct, unprincipled courtiers, twin-brothers in political intrigue. The extreme youth of Earl Douglas, Sir David his brother, and James their sovereign, does not admit of the development of their several characters. Many of these defects are corrected in 'Earl Douglas, a Tragedy.' The style possesses more dignity and energy, the characters are more strongly marked, the subordinate incidents more skilfully arranged, and the conduct of the whole drama rendered more interesting. The after-scene is judiciously retrenched; but the moral reflections interspersed are still sufficiently numerous. The description of passion is frequently substituted for the expression of genuine feeling. This fault was to be expected in a young writer, practised in descriptive poetry; in which species of composition, the habits of mind which fit a person for excellence, are extremely different from those which enable him to exhibit dramatic char acters successfully. Earl Douglas, the principal character, displays a lofty spirit of patriotism, blended with ambition and the pride of ancestry; but the part he acts is not sufficiently conspicuous to rouse powerful sympathy; and when he falls, it is rather the sense of injustice, than particular interest in the hero, which excites our indignation against the authors of his fate. Some interesting situations, however, occur, as when the rescue is attempted, and "the march of Douglas" heard at a distance; and in the following passages, the spirit of a young feudal chief is ably portrayed: CHANCELLOR. This ponderous blade bears deep undoubted signs DOUGLAS. Thrice twenty times with this, the good Sir James At Annand, Halidon, and Otterburn, And many a field in Britain and in France, When urged to save his life, by giving his sister in marriage to the Chancellor's son, he replies in the same style, When men recount the heroes of the name, Whose name, when dead, brought victory from the skies In such a list to be designed, the soft Faint-hearted William, whom soft female tears Melted to bow before his treacherous foe, And prostitute his sister The dastard Douglas, who survived his honour, After the reign of Bruce, no Scottish clan ever attained such power as the Douglasses, or acquired such popularity on the marches. They united, in an eminent degree, feudal pomp with martial bravery; and in England and France their fame was as great as in Scotland. A popular proverbial verse, preserved by Hume of Godscroft, runs thus: So many, so good, as of the Douglasses have been The lofty and daring spirit of the race is well delineated by our author: -The blood of Douglas Can only join with heroes of its kind, Who, to the dance, prefer the painful march; The court of Douglas might long have vied in magnificence with that of the kings of Scotland; and the chief enumerated among his vassals many clans that afterwards rose to eminence and power, on the ruins of the family. The passage which delineates the plenitude of this power, exhibits a curious feudal picture: -The South and West attend Lord Douglas' call. CHANCELLOR. The grandeur of that lofty house you know; His strengths, and wide domains; his daring leagues LIVINGSTON. Heavens! what a list of peers-to attend a traitor. CHANCELLOR. Well, I shall pass the flower of Annandale, When conquering England first stood check'd in France. LIVINGSTON. Say in a word, the whole of Scottish peers Attend a rebel boy. CHANCELLOR. Let me but mark The mightiest of the name; the sage Dalkeith, LIVINGSTON. Hell! I can hear no more-Douglas is king, CHANCELLOR. Had you but seen their grandeur, as they marched On neighing steeds, which trod the earth with scorn; And marked what dignity their brows adorned! The Douglasses distinguished!-valiant name— This presents no unfaithful picture of the power and magnificence of Douglas, and characterises happily the spirit of the clan. The fall of Douglas was lamented in rude but energetic strains by his followers. The first verse of one of these, which relates to the subject of this drama, is preserved by Hume of Godscroft in his history of Douglas: The popularity of the family was not destroyed by this proscription; but their misfortunes seem rather to have endeared their memory to the common people. In their flourishing state, the superiority of their power repressed the feuds of the inferior clans, and presented a formidable front to the incursions of England; and they were recollected only as the preservers of social order, and the defenders of their country. The composition of this drama is one of the latest tributes of popular opinion to the name of Douglas; for the choice of the subject was suggested by the traditions of Clydesdale. The poem 'Clyde' seems to have been the favourite production of our author, and the composition, in the correction of which he bestowed the greatest labour. 'Nethan,' the original sketch which he expanded into 'Clyde,' consists of 626 verses. The versification is gen (1) Hume of Godscroft's History of Douglas, vol. i. p. 288. с |